Oh man, I REALLY LIKED this story. So simple. Feels like a memoir/straight out of life - I think that's what I would have assumed if you hadn't said it was a 'short story.' I definitely feel like I know all these people. Everybody so broken and so determined at the same time. Keep it up!
Oh man, I REALLY LIKED this story. So simple. Feels like a memoir/straight out of life - I think that's what I would have assumed if you hadn't said it was a 'short story.' I definitely feel like I know all these people. Everybody so broken and so determined at the same time. Keep it up!