Sam. It's very easy to do the blank narrator bit. Who IS Rachel really? Why is she such a blank? Why is the action occurring through somebody else - and she's just a passive recipient of it?
Dude. What's with you and the tude? I thought it was just a really sexy, well-crafted story - a great thing to just be posted on the web. Who made you, David Steiger, the boss of everything?
Sing it brutha
Sam. It's very easy to do the blank narrator bit. Who IS Rachel really? Why is she such a blank? Why is the action occurring through somebody else - and she's just a passive recipient of it?
Not bad but not great either.
Dude. What's with you and the tude? I thought it was just a really sexy, well-crafted story - a great thing to just be posted on the web. Who made you, David Steiger, the boss of everything?
Well, I take literature very seriously and believe it should be excellent always. You?
Yeah, I like literature too but that doesn't mean I go around writing rude comments on Substacks about it.