I'm not a writer only a reader. I liked this very much indeed. The unsentimental narration, like a police interview or someone talking to a stranger at a bar. The story is itself is full of dark emotion by contrast. It's sad and subtle, alluding to a depth of detail in a few paragraphs that belies it's brevity. You so brilliantly evoke a long history of experiences for a group of people in a few lines. It will stay with me for a long time. Thank you.
I'm not a writer only a reader. I liked this very much indeed. The unsentimental narration, like a police interview or someone talking to a stranger at a bar. The story is itself is full of dark emotion by contrast. It's sad and subtle, alluding to a depth of detail in a few paragraphs that belies it's brevity. You so brilliantly evoke a long history of experiences for a group of people in a few lines. It will stay with me for a long time. Thank you.