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Adam Pearson's avatar

Alexa has determined that Paul’s genes are not optimal for the developers’ populating planning. This story would have been scifi a decade ago, but now it’s a contemporary slice of life.

Sam Kahn's avatar

Haha that's right. When does sci-fi stop being sci-fi and just become social realism? It feels like we need another word for the genre - 'technological realism' or something.

Geoff Nathan's avatar

Excellent! You tell a great (and creepy) story.

Sam Kahn's avatar

Thanks so much Geoff!

Nathan Keller's avatar

With stories like this the John Q Public's of the 1930s amrca did their best thinking. Amazing Stories mag. You definitely censored, my Mr. Han does not like your attitude, where are the home land security deescalating paramedicbots in the aftermath? Is unclear where the neighborhood 'mothers might be. We know this was an oversight, right now will only cite you for spelling, overzealous perfect punct. Talk later, hooldoon! Boop beep!

Sam Kahn's avatar

Beep beep to you! Appreciate it Nathan! Totally, dystopian fiction can be such great social critique.

Portia's avatar

It reads like an elegantly creepy "Black Mirror" episode.

Sam Kahn's avatar

Thank you Portia! I think that's a good thing lol. I don't usually write sci-fi-type pieces. Wanted to branch out a bit.

Portia's avatar

Branch our more often, Sam!