Sam, my apologies for writing in late this week. But in time to say the usual - that you can do better. I find this to be a little flat, just like a thought moving around the protagonist's head. Maybe that's all that psychedelics are? I don't really know. But in literature we need more obstacles, more external conflicts. In short, more social immersion.
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Sam, my apologies for writing in late this week. But in time to say the usual - that you can do better. I find this to be a little flat, just like a thought moving around the protagonist's head. Maybe that's all that psychedelics are? I don't really know. But in literature we need more obstacles, more external conflicts. In short, more social immersion.